More Parchment Paper!

I was assigned a project to use screens in a photograph. Given my prior amazing experiences with parchment paper, I decided it would be fun to incorporate it into this project. I took my phone, as the screen I needed to use, and put up a photo I took a month or two ago. Then, I placed parchment paper over the phone and experimented with different cutouts. It is incredible the technology we have today that can be utilized in so many different ways! As I was editing, my peers and teacher gave me feedback that the following photograph was the one that stood out to them the most. I am actually working on editing another screen series! What do you guys think? Any suggestions or comments? Would love to hear feedback!